From this feedback I now know that my detail on the history of Unilever, Pot Noodle, demographics, phychographics and target audience is high and I should make sure that the rest of my work reaches that standard. I also know that my idea is clear and easy to sell. My line of appeal is 'happy families'.
Another thing that was not written down was that I needed to work on my 'SPG' (spelling, punctuation, grammar) as I had a few mistakes in the presentation.
This advert follows a comedic route and uses creative and original ideas to express the narrative of the small story. The plot of this advertisement is that a young boy (probably around 18/19) saying how he wants to make it and how pot noodles are good because it gives him more time to train. In the end you see his family all gather around the TV of a big boxing match, then you hear