Thursday 26 November 2015

Peer Pitch and Feedback

             
From this feedback I now know that my detail on the history of Unilever, Pot Noodle, demographics, phychographics and target audience is high and I should make sure that the rest of my work reaches that standard. I also know that my idea is clear and easy to sell. My line of appeal is 'happy families'.
Another thing that was not written down was that I needed to work on my 'SPG' (spelling, punctuation, grammar) as I had a few mistakes in the presentation.

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